Audience Feedback

Audience Feedback Question One

Comments
Very good
Really good
Good mimiming
Good song
Needs more connection
More emphasise on them being a couple needed
Didn't see a storyline
It doesn't flow 

Audience Feedback Question Two

Comments
Story good and clear
Very sweet
Good style
Clear song
Indie video
Lots of guitar
Tells a story
Concept and setting fits the genre
Guitar playing is bad
Good
Similar to others

Audience Feedback Queston Three

Comments
Obvious mostly
A little
Some extent
Lyrics fit with what's shown
Good lyrics
Narrative works well
More close ups of 'Hold' 

Audience Feedback Question Four

Are There Any Improvements We Could Make To Our Video?

Improve performance (mainly improve lip syncing) 13
No 3
Yes 2
Make narrative slightly clearer 2
Improve last shot
Improve the bedroom shot of our girl actor
Less repetition
Vary shots
Less variety